Bluets, Black Balsam Trail

Elaine Bleakney

Like whispering.Hushed works on paper after the violetpainting is done.Hiking the dark seam to the ridge.Hearing nothing from you now.No one went swinging from rafters.The grove pitches shadows. No fire.Like a man on a bike hit by a car.His spine, singing.He rolled over the hood.Into the shattering.Like time after the paintingexpanding, believed-in —back of the brain, now.Outpaced by lovelike intelligence.Dark seam. Nothingof you now.

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Elaine lives in the mountains of Western North Carolina. Her new collection of poems, Take the Exit Then Exit, was published by Understory Books in April 2026 and was a National Poetry Series finalist. Elaine’s previous books include For Another Writing Back, an avant-memoir in lyric prose (Sidebrow Books, 2014) and the chapbook 20 Paintings by Laura Owens, an ekphrastic conversation (Poor Claudia, 2013). She has been a resident at the Vermont Studio Center and the Little Brown Mushroom Camp for Socially Awkward Visual Storytellers. Elaine has taught writing to artists as a guest at Penland School of Craft, Warren Wilson College, the University of North Carolina Asheville, and elsewhere.

"Elaine Bleakney’s Take the Exit Then Exit is a book of fragments. It is a book that is resolute in the incomplete, broken, half-heard, and half-spoken, and yet it is insistently alive to the strangeness of being and especially of being in relation to other people. At the edges of these poems beckon a wholeness that’s neither desired nor welcome. For Bleakney, wholeness might be another word for the past, story, family, love, or even language, each a form that cannot reflect the complexity and turbulence it contains. Indeed, she is a poet suspicious of form’s illusory promises, and rightly so: 'The worst is feeling / I must spend my life / trapped inside a tree with you.' What is so brave and surprising about Take the Exit Then Exit is that moving through these fragments we arrive at a clear-eyed vision of the self’s ferocity and a radiance that shines –'creaking singing'– like truth."
—Jennifer Chang, author of An Authentic Life

"The poems in Take the Exit Then Exit are notable for their distillation and brevity, their undertow of longing and loss, and their clean diction which cuts like a knife. So much happens between Bleakney’s lines, which hum with the electricity of the unsaid, and the 'formal feeling' Emily Dickinson wrote about, which can come 'after great pain.' Yet there is also resilience here, and wit. How can you resist a poem that begins: 'Two rhododendrons/ hold each other in hell.//And bloom.'?"
—Amy Gerstler, author of Index of Women

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