“Whoso List to Hunt” wrests the sonnet from Petrarch’s Italian into English. It is made of hunger.
Picture an animal moving through bright leaves. You like to hunt? Wyatt asks. He is a hunter speaking to hunters.
Just before the turn at the end of line eight, the hunter’s breath gives out, becomes general: wind from a net.
The sestet repeats the octave’s opening line but with a difference: the generalized infinitive to hunt is particularized via an object: You want to hunt her?
Though his body fails, the poet may not withdraw his mind from the deer, his captor. This is his travail—the way the mind bolts from the exhausted body, tugging at its leash.
Fainting I follow marks a metrical disruption, a dactyl followed by a troche, five syllables of what is sometimes called “falling meter.” This is where he falls.
Travail comes from medieval Latin, trepalium, meaning “three stakes” and referring to an instrument of torture.
In the sestet, the poet imagines his replacement, another hunter whose time will be spilled out like breath or like semen. The sonnet makes an economy of these expenditures.
Graven draws writing back to the kill, which is, though the beauty of the poem almost lets us forget it, the object of this hunt.
Noli me tangere—touch me not—is from Pliny the Elder, who describes deer wearing the inscription around their necks 300 years after Caesar’s death. In the
gospel of John, it is what Jesus says to Mary Magdalene after he rises from the tomb. In both cases, linked to deathlessness.<
The voice of the hind is not a voice at all but a collar decorated with an I, a circular form in which total possession becomes a wildness and wildness a form of possession.
The last lines have eleven and nine syllables respectively, and so seem unsteady in the context of the poem’s overall ten syllable line pattern. I imagine this unsteadiness as the holy ghost of an actual animal.
The hind is barely there at all, only a fair neck. Anybody’s. You like to hunt?
Sometimes a slight constriction of the throat. You can’t take it off.
